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Christina

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The Busy Writer | I've written 308+ articles online. Currently learning how to copywrite & grow Twitter. Sharing what I learn. Money goal #1: $3k / month.

How to Copywrite 101: Use P.A.S.T.O.R. to Sell Without Selling Too Hard
Christina

Want to sell products without sounding like a slimy car salesman?

Time to learn P.A.S.T.O.R.

I learned this in Ray Edward's book called "How to Write Copy That Sells", and now I'm going to teach you. This selling style helps a person make a decision that will benefit them.

đŸ”„ P = Person, Problem, and Pain

You always want to start with a problem that a person has that's causing them pain. Describe the problem in a lot of detail and use words that the person would use.

đŸ”„ A = Amplify and Aspirations

Once you identified someone's pain, you want to amplify that pain, talk about the consequences of not solving the problem, and refer to their aspirations for the future.

đŸ”„ S = Story, Solution, and System

Now is the time to offer a solution for your person. This is where you solve their problem by telling stories. You can tell your own story of how you overcame the same problem, or tell someone else's story.

đŸ”„ T = Transformation and Testimony

Important: People don't buy your product, they buy the transformation! A person doesn't buy a Peloton to have an indoor bike taking up space in their home. They buy it to fit into their skinny jeans. (Don't ask me how I know... 😁)

Also, let’s mention testimonies. They are a major KEY in selling. Show how other people solved their problems with your product.

đŸ”„ O = Offer

Most of your copy (80%) should focus on the transformation. But you do need to let people know what they’re getting for their money. That’s where the offer comes in. Tell them exactly what you’re offering.

đŸ”„ R = Response

Finally, tell the customer EXACTLY what you want them to do. Don’t ask, tell them. (Believe it or not, people love being told what to do.) Be specific. “Click this button now, and we’ll ship everything out to you right away.”

Want even more copywriting tips and tactics?

This was just a quick and dirty version of how to copywrite using P.A.S.T.O.R. If you’d like more details, pick up Ray Edward’s book, “How to Write Copy That Sells”.

You can also follow me on Twitter at @V2Christina as I dive even deeper into the captivating world of copywriting.

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