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Jill Metcalfe

3y ago

I write online about digital note-taking, Zettelkasten and Notion.

3 Ways New Writers Can Cut the Fluff and Make Their Writing Stronger and More Engaging
Jill Metcalfe

Sticking to the word count is one of the hardest things about writing Atomic Essays, but it’s one of the most useful skills you can learn.

Why you should learn to keep it short

  • 250 words is the perfect length to explore a single idea in some depth.

  • Writing up that one idea will help to clarify your thoughts. If your thoughts aren’t clear, maybe it’s not such a great idea. Pick a new one.

  • Every word must count, so you have to be deliberate in your choice of language. You will broaden your active vocabulary by ensuring each word earns its keep and hits the target.

  • A short essay means fewer clicks and scrolls for the reader, so they’re more likely to stay with you to the end.

How to keep it short

Choose one idea.

Your 500-word essay probably contains several: pick the best and discard the rest. You can write about the others another time.

Tighten up your language

Seek and destroy padding, repetition, vague formulations and qualifying statements. Many "I" statements ("I hope you...") are only there to make you feel more comfortable, and add no value to your reader.

Delete them and your message will come through more clearly.

Be authoritative

The reader has accepted your invitation to read your essay, and now you’re in charge.

So take command. Use affirmative language and declarative statements. No qualifications, no on-the-other-hands.

This can be the hardest mindset shift for new writers because it feels uncomfortable, but your writing will end up far stronger for it.

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