Jake Radic π’
3y ago
Passionate about documenting my journey as I chase fulfillment and success in life
Suppose...
Just suppose...
That 5 years ago
You invested in well located land.
Would be a dope investment right?
That's what today's sales letter is all about.
Lets break it down
https://www.yumpu.com/en/document/read/51323451/1g3kkgf/361
Page 372 you can find Robert Barlett Reality Co.'s sales letter
1/ Hook
Same hook I used in the first tweet...
It's engaging.
It piques curiosity...
You know what else it does?
It sets the stage for
β’ future pacing
β’ authority
β’ audience selling themselves
Lotta potency here...
2/ Future Pacing
This is selling to the emotional brain.
The letter paints the picture
Of what it would be like
To have bought land in the past...
Have a new home...
Comfortable family living...
In the burbs....
Ahhhhh. the life.
Future pacing is effective.
Why?
It gets the reader to start selling themselves.
They start seeing themselves living with the benefits of the product.
They start romanticizing your solution.
That's the bees knees.
3/ Credibility & Justification
Facts.
Cold hard facts.
Investment doubled in 10 years? And that's a fact?
Adds serious credibility.
This credibility also gives the argument
Vs other investments a stool to stand.
As you can see from history
A is better than B...
So you should do A.
Sounds credible to me...
This sells to the logical brain.
4/ Specificity
Once they sold you on the vehicle
They needed to sell you on how they can help...
For this one?
It's the nuances of buying land.
You can't just buy ANY land...
Has to be special...
And they're the experts ;)
5/ Small Commitment
The ask is (relatively) small.
Only $170 down...
This is makes for an easier yes.
Once you're sold on $170
They'll sell you on the rest of the investment.
But step 1?
Get that first yes
6/ Risk Mitigation
This one's not as punchy as others
There's no refund.
There's no trial...
They offer no obligation.
They offer space to think.
While it isn't much...
Something is always better than nothing.
7/ Clear Instructions
Once they've sold you
They need the money...
How can they get it if you don't know what to do?
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A confused mind always says no.
They give clear cut instructions so they can get paiiidddddddd
New observation from today's letter
β’ sold emotions first
β’ sold logic second
β’ gave good reason to back it all up
Lets see if this becomes a trend.
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Breaking down 30 sales letters in 30 days
Today was day 7 (I think?)
Just getting started and lots more to do!
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